The feedback I received was very positive and the changes I was due to make were simple but also very effective.
Below is my second draft for the trailer for The Mancuian Way.
The main changes I have made are:
- Changed the beginning title card to e4, for brand identity.
- Added music to my trailer to make it look much more effective
- Added more title cards to the end of the trailer
- Taken away the voice over
- Changed the storyline slightly
I still need to re-film some shots and add another voice over towards the end of the trailer.
This is really good, the music fits well with the trailer and is edited well. Maybe you could fade the music at the end so its not such an abrupt stop :)
ReplyDeleteThe music fits in really well with the trailer and the use of editing is good as its short but tells the stroy, you have used some good effects which add to the trailer. All you need to do is re shoot scene one
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