A lot of the changes were also down to my own preference as I personally ft into the target market for my soap so it was suitable for me to leave myself some criticism so that my soap would appeal to the others in my target market.
Below are some screenshots of the feedback that people left me. I will then show how I acted upon the feedback and made the changes necessary.
Feedback received on 'The Mancunian Way' trailer draft one:
From this feedback I then made these changes:
Feedback received on 'The Mancunian Way' trailer draft two:
From this feedback I then made these changes:
Feedback for Trailer draft three:
Feedback suggested to improve my ancillary billboard draft one:
Feedback on my Ancillary front cover draft one:
Feedback on my Front cover draft two:
Feedback on Billboard Draft two:








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