On this version, from the previous I have added in another feature and a quote at the top of the page, edited the image contrast and background colours.
I made most of these changes on my own accord, to make my work appear better. I made all my text and features bigger and bold so that they can be read a lot easier, previously they were small and hard to read. I still think that the two features on the right need enlarging as they appear smaller than the feature on the right.
I edited the image as previously it was very bright, but now it looks more sharp and airbrushed.
The background colour was also changed as now it looks more professional as it is not as bright, and the star stands out on the page as he has a slight glow around him.
Good, everything's in place. Could do with changing the "guilty pleasure" font to a serif to match the real thing more closely. Image is good but has he been stretched? Looks slightly too wide. "Ladies'" not "ladie's". "Tarquin Jackson" should be bold so audience knows who he is.
ReplyDeleteAlso, you can't get Grammies for acting... do you mean BAFTA?! :)